Burning illusions R&R

CreedGuy16 · 01-08-2004, 10:11 AM

finally free of the world that I made
I can turn and see the place that I stayed
it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky
I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why
why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried
nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died
shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay
but I know if I do I wont live one more day
the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were
they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure
hate and lies spread through the masses
while the little that I brought slowly passes
staring in fear of the world I created
flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated
smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say
reality kills the hope and I bleed here today
my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind
the days slowly pass and someday ill meand

creedsister · 01-08-2004, 02:26 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by CreedGuy16) finally free of the world that I made
I can turn and see the place that I stayed
it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky
I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why
why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried
nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died
shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay
but I know if I do I wont live one more day
the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were
they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure
hate and lies spread through the masses
while the little that I brought slowly passes
staring in fear of the world I created
flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated
smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say
reality kills the hope and I bleed here today
my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind
the days slowly pass and someday ill meand

this Part Really Touches Me}}Why Did Everything Fall Apart While I Stood And I Tried And }Shadows Of the People I Knew Cry For Me To Stay....that was good in a sad kinda way

Dogstar · 01-08-2004, 05:21 PM

Quote: my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind
the days slowly pass and someday ill meand

That's a terrific line...it paints a great picture in my mind...Great job, CreedGuy16!

JulieCitySlicker · 01-14-2004, 10:08 PM

Very good CreedGuy

01-08-2004, 10:11 AM	#1
CreedGuy16 USER INFO » Status: Illusion Posts: 16 Joined: Aug 2003 Currently: Offline	Burning illusions R&R finally free of the world that I made I can turn and see the place that I stayed it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay but I know if I do I wont live one more day the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure hate and lies spread through the masses while the little that I brought slowly passes staring in fear of the world I created flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say reality kills the hope and I bleed here today my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind the days slowly pass and someday ill meand

01-08-2004, 02:26 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by CreedGuy16) finally free of the world that I made I can turn and see the place that I stayed it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay but I know if I do I wont live one more day the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure hate and lies spread through the masses while the little that I brought slowly passes staring in fear of the world I created flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say reality kills the hope and I bleed here today my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind the days slowly pass and someday ill meand this Part Really Touches Me}}Why Did Everything Fall Apart While I Stood And I Tried And }Shadows Of the People I Knew Cry For Me To Stay....that was good in a sad kinda way __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-08-2004, 05:21 PM	#3
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Quote: my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind the days slowly pass and someday ill meand That's a terrific line...it paints a great picture in my mind...Great job, CreedGuy16! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-14-2004, 10:08 PM	#4
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	Very good CreedGuy __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

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