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08-23-2004, 10:35 PM
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Grand Design
Grand Design
Would that you doubt my dedication Could deliver the coup de gras… The final blow of indignation With nothing to break my fall… Now all the walls have crumbled To reality we’re bound Standing in the rubble More lost than I am found The aftermath of years gone by Are deemed to memory On broken wings I try to fly Fighting to break free... Holding on tho strength is failing Can’t help but still believe Through changing winds prevailing Birth’s given thoughts conceived… This night of transformation done The sun again will shine We’ll finish what was once begun Within this grand design. ©2004 Susan D. Last edited by Ann Allusion : 08-23-2004 at 11:05 PM. |
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08-23-2004, 10:45 PM
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Whoooooooooooooooo Great Work
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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08-25-2004, 04:53 PM
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good one!
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08-25-2004, 09:02 PM
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thanks for reading everyone...
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08-28-2004, 12:35 PM
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Wow, those visuals made me think of 9/11. Powerful stuff, Ann.
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