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Old 07-13-2004, 12:30 PM   #1
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If Time Stood Still

If Time Stood Still

If time stood still would you wait for me?
In a field of flowers
By an old oak tree….
Wind in your hair…
Blowin’ wild and free
Warmed by the sun
Would you wait for me?

If time stood still would you wait for me?
Hold in your heart
Old memories…
Of times gone by
And times to be
See me in dreams…
Would you wait for me?

Would you move mountains
Search endlessly
Do you think you’d know me?
See thru my transparencies

If time stood still would you wait for me?
Alas, it can’t
That’s absurdity…
Yet,
Anything’s possible
When we believe
Miracles happen
Would you wait for me?

©2004
Susan D.


just one of those things that wrote it's self again...hope y'all enjoy...

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Old 07-13-2004, 03:04 PM   #2
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That was Soul touching Like A Quiet whisper Ann, Would you move , mountains search endlessly DO YOU THINK YOU,D KNOW ME THRU MY TRANSPARENCIES
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Old 07-14-2004, 02:47 AM   #3
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thank you for reading, creedsister...sometimes more can be said with a whisper than with a shout...

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Old 07-14-2004, 02:32 PM   #4
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oh i know
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 07-14-2004, 05:54 PM   #5
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Love that one, Ann...this is my favorite part.

Would you move mountains
Search endlessly
Do you think you’d know me?
See thru my transparencies

I don't know if I'm on target with my little interpretation, but that verse makes me think of a bigger implication: Am I worthy?

I like words that make me think.
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Old 07-14-2004, 06:29 PM   #6
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Very good poem Ann Allusion
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I'm a wandering soul
I'm still walking the line that leads me home
alone
All I know
I still got mountains to climb
on my own


Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot
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Old 07-15-2004, 04:31 PM   #7
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thank you for your kind replies and for reading this piece....glad y'all enjoyed it...

~peace
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Old 07-15-2004, 07:26 PM   #8
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awesome like it
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