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just checking something
Holding on to pain
Just let go, my love sustains you When everythings the same Help you with all you've been through I cannot deny That though Im plagued I feel no sickness Even though I try I fall apart and die of weakness I should have seen this coming a mile away I shouldnt have turned my back and wished to fade Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed I am a man drowned by sorrow Used all the strength that I could borrow The face I hide will now bleed forever more Until death greets me at my door.
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08-17-2004, 04:14 AM
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Word To Yo Mama It Checked Out Did Kim Help You With That One
 
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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08-17-2004, 11:23 PM
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That was really good Kevin
I liked it a lot 
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Thanks alot. No, Kim didnt help with this one.
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08-19-2004, 12:34 PM
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nice writing, Mr. Seeker...
enjoyed reading it. ~peace |
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08-19-2004, 01:02 PM
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Way to go, MrSeeker! I loved these two lines...nicely done:
Buckled under all the weight and turned to grey Couldnt help, but run when I should have stayed
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thanks much
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