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Old 03-03-2006, 11:26 AM   #1
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Roses

Roses

Sitting here at home sweet home
I decide to write a poem about roses for an empty room
This story‘s maybe for you and me
Would you be there to shine the light onto my sea?

And as I roam to the point near before
Don‘t you look away
Don‘t you look away
Someone‘s going to be on my way
Someone‘s going to be

And if you‘re the one I want to see
Will you be there to open up your arms for me?
And open up a road before our eyes
With green trees and blue seas under a sunset sky?

And as I roam to the point near before
Don‘t you look away
Don‘t you look away
Someone‘s going to be on my way
Someone‘s going to be

Let me be your „everything will be allright“
Let me be your
Let me be your „we‘re going to reach our dreams sometime“
Let me be your
Let you and me share tradition
Let you and me share
Let me be your nearest friend
Just let me be your nearest friend

Let us try to do the best to give love to all
Let us try to do
Yeah let‘s try
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Old 03-03-2006, 12:15 PM   #2
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Re: Roses

i loved the entire piece, well written very well written
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Old 03-03-2006, 02:18 PM   #3
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Re: Roses

Me too, great song!
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Old 12-31-2006, 08:20 PM   #4
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Re: Roses

cant go wrong with a classic and the deep beauty of a rose,
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