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Old 05-10-2005, 01:25 AM   #1
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Bleeding Tears

Pardon the language, but i felt like i should post this one because i really feel for it, and have to say that its one of my best pieces yet.

Bleeding Tears

She dances in my memories
Bloody tears in her eyes
Each, running down her face
Made up of what she despised

She cried on my shoulder
The bloody shirt that i wear
Is a testament to everything
That i cannot bear to see

[Chorus]
What kind of a man
Could do this you ask?
One with no concious
One with a blood lust
What kind of person
Could take what she holds dear
One with no morals
She cries bleeding tears

Such fucking anger
I feel in my soul
Such fucking anger
A seething black hole
I want to fill it with memories
Of her dancing in my mind
With joy written under her skin
With tears of joy running from her eyes

Her eyes mean more to me than reality

(chorus)
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Old 05-10-2005, 02:19 AM   #2
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that was most awsome one yet i really dont mind the language
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Old 05-10-2005, 09:40 AM   #3
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that was really good I really liked it!
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Old 05-16-2005, 07:59 PM   #4
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Awesome....soooo much emotion.
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Old 06-04-2005, 09:43 AM   #5
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Wow, amazing lyrics! Brings tears to my eyes.
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Old 06-05-2005, 12:06 AM   #6
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yes i loved it too
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