Sweet Surprise

Ann Allusion · 08-16-2005, 11:38 AM

Thought i would try writin' somethin' in accent, this was easiest for me...so this was kind of an experiment in "creativity" in a "dialogue" sort of way...hope it's not too difficult to understand...

Sweet Surprise

Were ya found just to be lost again?
Would ya pass by unknown
Not ev’n thinkin’ of me
Sittin’ here alone
‘Tis true ya dona know me
But ya could if ya chose to
Open up your eyes and see
What’s in front of you
The timin’ may be a smidgen off
But God knows we’re not pairfect
We should ne’re pass somethin’ by
When it could have a good effect
An ya won’t know unless ya try it
Like a coat to see if it fits…
Or taste it like a precious fruit…
Where ya savor each wee bit…
Findin’ heaven’s warmth and sweetness
Was lookin' just for you…and finally realizin’
Ya were lookin’ for it too…

©2005
All rights reserved
Susan D.

creedsister · 08-16-2005, 10:10 PM

dat was beautiful ya know again aint noting but da trut very familiar Again Another Awsome writing

Ann Allusion · 08-17-2005, 01:42 AM

thank ya...glad ya liked it...sweet surprises are always the best...

creedsister · 08-17-2005, 10:29 AM

yes they are precious

08-16-2005, 11:38 AM	#1
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Sweet Surprise Thought i would try writin' somethin' in accent, this was easiest for me...so this was kind of an experiment in "creativity" in a "dialogue" sort of way...hope it's not too difficult to understand... Sweet Surprise Were ya found just to be lost again? Would ya pass by unknown Not ev’n thinkin’ of me Sittin’ here alone ‘Tis true ya dona know me But ya could if ya chose to Open up your eyes and see What’s in front of you The timin’ may be a smidgen off But God knows we’re not pairfect We should ne’re pass somethin’ by When it could have a good effect An ya won’t know unless ya try it Like a coat to see if it fits… Or taste it like a precious fruit… Where ya savor each wee bit… Findin’ heaven’s warmth and sweetness Was lookin' just for you…and finally realizin’ Ya were lookin’ for it too… ©2005 All rights reserved Susan D. __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing Last edited by Ann Allusion : 08-16-2005 at 11:48 AM.

08-16-2005, 10:10 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	dat was beautiful ya know again aint noting but da trut very familiar Again Another Awsome writing __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

08-17-2005, 01:42 AM	#3
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	thank ya...glad ya liked it...sweet surprises are always the best... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

08-17-2005, 10:29 AM	#4
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	yes they are precious __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

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