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Old 09-17-2004, 04:52 PM   #1
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Revelation

Revelation

Never walked on water
Tho they thought you tried
Drowned within the passion
Hiding what you felt inside

When the gates were opened
Truth came pouring out
They’re still misunderstanding
What you’re all about

Never walked on water
Never said you could
Learned to take the bad
Along with what was good

The more they all cried out
The more you tried to give
Locked inside your prison
While others chose to live

Never walked on water
You’re learning how to swim
What was worn and broken
Became a brand new skin

Eyes once blind are open
At last you finally see
Where in lies the beauty
That sets the soul free

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Susan D.
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Old 09-17-2004, 06:06 PM   #2
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The Bad Along With The Good The More You Tried To Give Locked Inside Your Prison While Others Chose To Live That Paints A Pitchure Ann....I Liked It In Stuff,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 09-18-2004, 01:03 PM   #3
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..thank you...
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Old 09-18-2004, 01:57 PM   #4
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dont mention it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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