Would You?

The Lithium · 10-19-2003, 02:32 PM

Right folks...This is my newest lyric. I've write it for Emelie, you might know about her...(my girlfriend). I wrote it yesterday....She liked it!

I think it's at least okay...anyway....her it is!

And if your tears had a home
Would it be my eyes?
And if your soul had to run
Would it be to my heart?
And if your smile had an end
Would you come to me?

And if I'd own tonight
If I could say what's right
You bring me more then light

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

And if I'd lose my mind
Would you sacrifice your time?
And if I'd had to go
Would you be there to bring me back home?
And if I can't make it any better then this
Would this be fine?

And if I'd own tonight
If I could say what's right
You bring me more then light

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

And if your tears had a home
Would it be my eyes?
And if your soul had to run
Would it be to my heart?
And if I'd lose my mind
Would you sacrifice your time?

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

I think I am in love with you
Forget all I ever knew
I'm inside out because of you
And thank you for bringin' through

Oh, you know you're bringin' me through
I hope you know you're bringin' me through
It's because of you I can get through

Siana · 10-19-2003, 04:37 PM

it's great Lith,very sweet

cjme · 10-19-2003, 04:48 PM

so beautiful

Dogstar · 10-19-2003, 05:10 PM

very sweet, Lithium!

The Lithium · 10-20-2003, 09:09 AM

Thanks, I write a lot...

Redeemer · 10-20-2003, 10:04 AM

Lith, you've gotten even better since the last time I talked to you....if that's possible!!! Great lyric. Like I said in the "Take me higher" thread, Emelie is hella lucky to have you.

The Lithium · 10-21-2003, 10:37 AM

Well, I can't say that I feel that way....I just hope I can give her enough! I can't give more then I am, I really wish I could!! So I just feel like I'm happy, and I want Emelie to have whats best, and if she thinks I can give her that, I'm just greatful!!

Redeemer · 10-21-2003, 10:47 AM

Lith, the very best you can give her is all of yourself. That's the best anyone can give. Honesty, loyalty, trust,...I know you can give her that. I know you're the happiest dude in the world right now, and I'm happy for you. Hope you guys are the happiest ppl together!! (((HUGS)))

The Lithium · 10-22-2003, 03:08 AM

O-YEAH, we're happy! I know that I can't give her more then I am, so I give her everything I can. My life, my love, my soul! :P

Redeemer · 10-22-2003, 12:41 PM

Heh heh...you have to stick a little Creed in everything, don't ya?? :P
Btw, when the hell is your new website gonna be up?!?!?!?!?!?

The Lithium · 10-22-2003, 02:06 PM

As soon as it's done! :P I think you might have to wait a loooooong time!!

Redeemer · 10-24-2003, 12:35 PM

Dammit. :P

The Lithium · 10-24-2003, 01:40 PM

Well, that's one way to say it!

whitebird · 10-25-2003, 03:20 PM

I check back on the board from time to time, and when I saw that you had posted in the Creative Corner, I read your poem.

It is really very beautiful. There is a great amount of sensitivity in your soul to be able to write this for the girl that you love. I hope much happiness for the two of you.

Sincerely,

whitebird

Redeemer · 10-27-2003, 09:55 AM

My sentiments exactly.

10-19-2003, 04:48 PM	#3
cjme USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 160 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	so beautiful __________________ walks a dark and lonely highway...found a song to lift me up...let me cover, let me guide you, be the one to teach you love

10-19-2003, 05:10 PM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	very sweet, Lithium! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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10-25-2003, 03:20 PM	#14
whitebird USER INFO » Status: Blue Collar Posts: 630 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	I check back on the board from time to time, and when I saw that you had posted in the Creative Corner, I read your poem. It is really very beautiful. There is a great amount of sensitivity in your soul to be able to write this for the girl that you love. I hope much happiness for the two of you. Sincerely, whitebird

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