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Old 12-21-2003, 03:57 PM   #1
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Breaking Througe
Well, what can I say? I wrote this awhile ago and... Why not share it? Here you go!

Quote: Breaking Througe:
There's a million tears streaming down today
Promise myself to never do the same misstake again
I'm missing you, believe in you
People pray for you today
Promise myself to never cry again
I'm tursting you, loving you

Now I've realized that tomorrow is today
Promise myself to never waste time again
I'm seeing you, hearing you
I never want to feel what I feel today
Promise myself to never walk away again
I'm trying to, forget you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
You were right

The dark shines bright today
Promise myself to never be dazzled again
I'm calling you, losing you
Wish I could break through today
Promise myself to never be found again
I'm understanding you, visualizing you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
And you were right

And it doesn't really matter
I'm here
I wasn't right
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:35 PM   #2
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That's great! Thanks for sharing with us!
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:48 PM   #3
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I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me!
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Old 12-21-2003, 04:58 PM   #4
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Lith, way to go! Nicely done...Love the emotion in it.
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Old 12-21-2003, 11:43 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM) I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me!
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Old 12-22-2003, 04:57 AM   #6
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Thanks!
Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) Killer poem litch

That's my thing! Glad you guys liked it!
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Old 12-22-2003, 07:56 AM   #7
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yea, awesome job!!!
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Old 12-22-2003, 08:54 AM   #8
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Thanks. I write a lot. And I'm not even 15 yet! I am in a week!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) yea, awesome job!!!
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Old 12-23-2003, 04:25 AM   #10
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Thanks again
Thanks again guys. I just write whatever may come from my heart.
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Old 12-23-2003, 10:29 PM   #11
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litch i dont mean to sound stoopid but who in the heck is the dude on your avatar?
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-25-2003, 10:01 PM   #12
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great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!
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Quote: (Originally Posted by hide) great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!


I'm sure I will!
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