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01-13-2004, 05:33 PM | #1 |
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Continiuos Poem from Creed Members
Ok, this is an idea I got from a poem site. One of us starts a poem and others post and continue with it. Since I'm only capable of dark, someone else can start it and then other's can continue w/ it, even if it gets funny or awkward...sound fun? Hope so, have an awesome day everyone one!!
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To weak To cry to strong to die Im sick of the world and all its Lies~~~
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Tears from the sky fall from the skies above as the thought of mercy falls down with the thought of the lies.
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inside i dye but lies will always be the reason that tears fall from the sky but i have learned why the reason why the heaveans cry
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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It's just an ongoing clamber of raindrops on my outside porch, an ongoing sound of dread, with no answers.
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raindrops echos inside my head to remind me of the pain sometimes i feel i have lost more than i have gained but for now the anwsers will remain the same
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Nothing are they, not a sound, not a presence, not an act, the answers remain nothing.
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Forever dripping into my soul
They rip and tear,they take there toll There empty droplets,nothing more They cant end sorrow and they cant be the cure (was that ok? i have no clue what im doing,haha)
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dripping, drowning
turn me around swirl my existence bury my crown
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Drilling deeper
Endless hole Bloodless keeper Stare so cold
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Darker,
deeper, Final hour near, Send those eyedrops made of fear gave them such fragile wings... Send them up to heaven, but heaven was just too high, I watch them falter against the sky
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________________________ ______________________________ Souls... they float like the memories I've opened, Go... and kiss all the butterflies I've broken, Sow... their wings to the coat of my misfortune, Grow... to reach the plains only I have spoken... The Path ~by~ ManMade God Last edited by WeatheredWoman : 01-14-2004 at 02:21 PM. |
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they falter and fall as if they are ancients, as if they know all about the world,
yet they don't understand
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They don't understand the journey we take,
As we walk through this land The pain we all feel That's written in the sand
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i walk alone from were i stand theres no one there to hold my hand so i will keep my voice silent as it makes know sound
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your doing ok REALLY
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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