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01-15-2004, 01:30 AM | #1 |
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"Betrayed again by your so-called friends
Not careing anymore about anything or anyone Wishing yourself dead because of the words they said Hoping that you wont wake up the next morning Because everyone you thought you knew and loved turned their backs on you I want to die,I have nothing more to give I want to die,I have no reasons left to live Betrayel hurts,I would know Its burns so cold,just like the snow Except it burns in your heart,your soul, and your mind It eats away at everything,leaving nothing behind When the words are written deep within the sand And I take my life away with my own two hands I want to die, I want nothing more I want to die, I want to see my blood hit the floor AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH My heart is pounding in my head My soul is lifeless and almost dead My mind is slowly caving in I want to die!!!,when will it begin? I want to die,I have nothing more to give! I want to die,I have no reasons left to live!" I wrote that in a little under 10 minutes after hearing someone tell me they dont want to talk to me anymore. Hope you like it
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My heart is pounding inside my head my soul is lifeless and almost dead my mind is slowly caving in i want to die went well it begin}}I Loved it mrseeker~~that person must have sucked )) LOL))
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Actually it wasnt inspired by anyone,oddly enough...i just felt like writing somthing and that came out,so yea. im glad you liked it.
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Thanks Kim
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Really liked it. Would make a killer song (no pun intended...okay yeah it was, maybe )!
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ok i liked THE JOURANAL COOL
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HAHAHAHA,thanks
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HAHAHAHA your welcome
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