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Old 09-13-2004, 12:03 AM   #1
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In Your Own Sight

In Your Own Sight

A lofty eyed generation
Without thought or hesitation
Hold themselves in high esteem
Building on imagined dreams

Reality is sheer perfection
Chosen god-like by self election
Their only thought…make a name
Carving notches with their fame

CHORUS 1:
They cry let’s make a name
Make a name
Bring us honor
Recognition…Fame
Come out on top…can’t complain
That’s the purpose of life’s game

Look upon the face of pride
Something that the eyes can’t hide
Here we see the heart’s condition
Loosing sight of it’s true mission

CHORUS 2:
They cry let’s make a name
Make a name
Bring us honor
Recognition…Fame
Too soon…it’s called…end of game
No one remembers…such a shame

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Susan D.

i would like to say thank you to Heaven for the inspiring post that was made in the Faith Forum that brought about this piece...
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Old 09-14-2004, 02:30 AM   #2
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I Loved It
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 09-15-2004, 01:13 PM   #3
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i like that one
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Old 09-15-2004, 07:31 PM   #4
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HaHa Sorry Ann , wrong poem
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