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06-04-2005, 09:40 AM
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Dark Town
Dark Town
I look at the sky of this town overshadowed by dark clouds but how many really know the darkness of it's crown the place where beauty is sold where sad sad stories are told where the price of the soul is measured in gold You've sold out all that's true imprisoned wild horses butterflies that try desperatly to spread their wings hanging on a string angels don't come here anymore bringing salvation here is in vain this place on earth is too stained
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06-04-2005, 12:25 PM
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a very dramatic ending...xcellent! 
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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06-04-2005, 11:08 PM
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Omg words cannot say how good that was!
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Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds... |
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06-04-2005, 11:53 PM
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Oh I CAN THAT WAS REALLY GOOD
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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06-05-2005, 07:03 AM
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Thank you, it means a lot to me.
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06-05-2005, 12:23 PM
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yes the opening rocked
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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