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Old 05-30-2004, 03:38 AM   #1
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The Other

Restless on the edge of night
Unable to mask the glow
Of a thousand sins
That sear the skin
Of what used to be your soul

You signed the deal
You took the bait
Crying now
Won’t cleanse the slate

Naked on a bed of stone
Unable to shield the blow
Of another fault
That cracks the vault
Of what used to be your soul

You signed the deal
You locked the gate
Crying now
Won’t free your hate

Blinded by the dawn of day
Unable to staunch the flow
Of a bleeding wart
That drains the heart
Of what used to be your soul

You signed the deal
You couldn’t wait
Crying now
Won’t change your fate
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Old 05-30-2004, 03:46 AM   #2
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Hi Dogstar, Another Home Run I feel like that at times, I Feel A Lot things In Many ways But I Find stregneth To Press On, Thats Why The Good Lord Made Wine, ROCK ON !!!! HaHaHaHaHa
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Old 05-30-2004, 03:50 AM   #3
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Hahahahaha, I hear that! Wine would be nice about now...thanks for the kind words, creedsister!
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Old 05-30-2004, 04:07 AM   #4
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just a glass now Dogstar, hehe, HaHaHa
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Old 05-30-2004, 12:17 PM   #5
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Hahahaha, yeah, yeah, yeah
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Old 05-30-2004, 09:14 PM   #6
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another good job Kerri! May I recommend some Australian wine? So much better than that French crap! its Freedom Wine from the coalition of the willing!
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Old 05-30-2004, 09:17 PM   #7
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Hehehee, thanks, hide, and yes, I'll have some Australian wine. I love your country's wines!
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Old 05-31-2004, 12:50 AM   #8
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i would take any wine right about now im out
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Hehehee, thanks, hide, and yes, I'll have some Australian wine. I love your country's wines!

cool our wines have only taken off in the last decade, sell more than france these days i believe. its approved by george bush himself and "man of steel" and cricket fan john howard (please tell me you guys know who he is).
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Old 05-31-2004, 02:51 AM   #10
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I dont know him, Im sure Dogstar Does HaHa, Wine thread now
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Old 05-31-2004, 09:48 PM   #11
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LOL, hide and creedsister ...Yes, I know who he is, hide ...
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Old 05-31-2004, 09:49 PM   #12
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Quote: Restless on the edge of night
Unable to mask the glow
Of a thousand sins
That sear the skin
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That opening was my fav part!! Another wonderful poem, Kerri!
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Old 06-03-2004, 12:35 AM   #13
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Thanks much, Kris!!! I love your avie!!!
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