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Old 07-15-2004, 07:11 PM   #1
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No End

The point in this one is shaded and could really be anything but i thought u might like it anyway.

Don’t stumble!
You have to get up!
Keep running and you will be ok
We get a little bit further every day
But we have to keep moving!
Although my legs are weak and the pains consuming
My heart is racing and these thoughts confusing
But I still know I can win this race
Although I stumble and I cant keep their pace
There are so many stronger that don’t even place
And even they seem so far by now
I want to win but I don’t know how
And while thinking these thoughts the assurance set in
That I’ll never make it further than this
Iv stumbled here again
I’m not strong here and I can never win
I made it nowhere and I will never see the end
So I suppose I wasn’t meant for this race
I’m not meant to be here in this place
And even though I don’t know where I should go
I know its not here
There is nothing left to gain
There are so many things left to fear
The only thing left for me is to move on
Its been far to long
Its time to move on
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Old 07-15-2004, 07:25 PM   #2
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very good i like alot and your right about moving on but sometimes its like the hardest thing for me to do but anyways that was really good.
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Old 07-15-2004, 11:21 PM   #3
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That was Awsome I was really in to the opening Thank you Rules For Another HomeRun
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 07-16-2004, 09:51 PM   #4
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wonderful poem
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walks a dark and lonely highway...found a song to lift me up...let me cover, let me guide you, be the one to teach you love
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