"Alone"

[MrSeeker]

"Save me from myself (Im everything i despise)
Save me from myself (I cant take all my lies)
Break me! (I need to be broken)
Break me! (shatter me to pieces)
Take me! (do what you will with my lifeless body)
Take me! (I cant take the pain)
Take away the chanes that bind me (set me free!)
My skin is burning and Im trying to kill the pain,
Wash away my stains of blood from the cutting.
Somtimes the pain hurts so much that i try to kill it by taking the knife to bone, I feel so alone down here, all i need is someone to talk to,but the only one i can talk to is You,but it seems that You cant hear me or maybe Your just ignoring me,
so i guess i'll go on finding ways to numb my pain.
(guitar interlude)
One day i know it will be too late and i'll be dead in a ditch with a knife in my wrist,just because i didnt have someone to talk to.
I tried to drown my sorrows in alcohol and drugs,but it just left me the same,it couldnt take away my pain; i cant wash away my scars so now i turn to You,i guess for now You will have to do, i want to believe everything You say is true, You say You love me and i think i love You too
(bridge)
(the blood,it flows; the scars,they show; its sad,i know) (X2)
I just cant stop cutting to stop my feelings of being alone
I cant take this, i want to die!!!!!!!!
*whisper* all i needed was someone to talk to
(guitar interlude)
I know millions feel this way and i curse the day You took her away (she took her life with a knife) All she needed was someone to talk to and tell her she was loved,but no, she had to die alone and now she will never make it Home.
(Remember your not alone,your never alone)"


What ya think? Be honest,please.
I am not singing the first part, the first part is being sung by a female, the part where it says "i know millions feel this way" is where i start singing,i also sing the parts in these ( )
So yea.
Note: i am sorry if this sounds anything like Evanescence, i just kinda realized it sounds kinda like them now,but i in no way tried to make it that way, it kinda sounds like them by accident,i wrote it and then realized it sounds like them so again,im sorry if it does.

[ZION1010]

I liked it ......It was killer....... Reminds Me Of Me At one time.........Pray Jesus Name Im Not Like That Anymore........

[ZION1010]

TYPO sorry thats just me praise

[MrSeeker]

Thanks,so you really liked it?

[ZION1010]

Yea I Never Say anything i Dont mean......Kay......I liked it...

[ZION1010]

Whtcha....been...up...to...by...the...way there...mrseeker

[MrSeeker]

(ZION1010, check your pm's)

[ZION1010]

I Opend It...I Forget To From....Time To Time.....Check your...Email....please...Mrseeker

[MrSeeker]

I did,hehe

[ZION1010]

okay

[paulosousa6]

hey it's great!!!!!!!!!!! WHY don't u add the crd???????
Bye...congratulations!!!!!!!

[ZION1010]

Take this Pain Away.....Because I Cant Make It Not One more Day....Free Me From This pain...Let me see a Light before i Dye Free me From My tears I Know Now That No one hears Free me From Fears Free Me From the Gates That Cant Wait Too Let Me In...Got open Invitation To Hell Please Free Me From This Fate Oh Please Dont Let It Be To Late....No Ones Hearing me how Could This be youve Pushed My Cry A side Left Me Here To Dye,,,,Oh Why must death Target And desire Me...Why Wont It Shut Its Gates For Me It just cant Wait....Please someone tell me its not too late...Ps Some one did

[ZION1010]

another not so me anymore poem,,,,it was written....Dec 20 1999

[MrSeeker]

Thanks,Im glad ya liked it. What is the crd?
Nice poem ZION : )

[ZION1010]

i was wondering thing about the cdr