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09-19-2004, 07:11 PM
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Under The Gun
Under The Gun
When your eyes are open Do you happen to see All that’s going on Around you and me Some things are different Yet stay the same The past won’t erase By changing your name When your eyes are open Does the sun warm your face As mem’ries transport To a long, lost place Where life just felt right Where you only had fun Never having to feel You were under the gun Under the gun You’ve learned to deal Under the gun You’ve forgotten to feel Under the gun Life isn’t the same When you live under the gun With emotions untamed When your eyes are open You communicate Learn to forgive Forget how to hate When you’re under the gun It’s all about love At times it takes more Than a shove Under the gun Tho passions may reign Under the gun It’s nothing but pain When you live under the gun With emotions untamed ©2004 Susan D. |
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09-19-2004, 08:06 PM
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that poem or song was truly wow i really loved that one bravo.
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09-19-2004, 09:03 PM
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Wow Ann, That Was Very Wide Ranged, AWSOMEEEEEEEEEEE
 I Really Really Liked It,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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09-20-2004, 10:16 AM
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it's lyrics...
thanks y'all for reading them...glad you enjoyed... |
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09-29-2004, 01:14 PM
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Great job, Ann...I loved this part:
Under the gun You’ve learned to deal Under the gun You’ve forgotten to feel Under the gun Life isn’t the same When you live under the gun With emotions untamed
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09-29-2004, 04:35 PM
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thank you...thank you v'ry much...dogstar...
 forgive me just in a goofy mood...:lol |
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