Help me

HR2004 · 02-04-2005, 05:20 PM

Desperation in the air.
Pieces of hurt everywhere.
The tears blurring my vision.
Streaking my cheeks a color red.
Theres no one to wipe them off.
For I alone cannot stop the pain.
Despair now a thick fog.
I cant see the way out.
Is there even a doorway to peace.
I fear there is not.
The pain increasing.
My head now aching.
Is this suppose to awaken me.
My eyes open wide.
Searching to find.
Spinning around a place of hurt.
Sorrows embracing me.
Taking my happiness away.
All of it now gone it has left me.
Screaming why.
I cant comprehend.
No ones hand reacing to save me.
Cant anyone see the pain thats now on the outside?
See the hurt on the surface of my eyes.
See the sorrows that floods my pride.
Can anyone see the tears?
Can anyone hear my cries?
Someone please help me.
Closed in a place of darkness.
No light to see.
No one trying to find me.
The scars visible and deeping.
My hearts now bleeding.
Its getting cold in here in the darkness.
I've opened my eyes for one last time.
Looking for one tread of light.
One last hope.
My hand outstreached,
Someone please pull me up.
Save me from this misery.
Still waiting for someone to quickly grab me
before fate catches me.
Wont anyone help me?

creedsister · 02-04-2005, 10:03 PM

} } Liked it

HR2004 · 02-05-2005, 01:16 PM

thanks

Anna1011 · 02-06-2005, 06:01 AM

nice, real nice

HR2004 · 02-06-2005, 11:19 PM

thank you i thought it was nice one of my best.

Ann Allusion · 02-07-2005, 01:01 AM

quite emotional...

HR2004 · 02-07-2005, 05:10 PM

yeah well i was very emotional like when something great happen or when something bad happens poems come easier than breathing i think you know when the poem came from the heart of that person or what their feeling.

02-04-2005, 05:20 PM	#1
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	Help me Desperation in the air. Pieces of hurt everywhere. The tears blurring my vision. Streaking my cheeks a color red. Theres no one to wipe them off. For I alone cannot stop the pain. Despair now a thick fog. I cant see the way out. Is there even a doorway to peace. I fear there is not. The pain increasing. My head now aching. Is this suppose to awaken me. My eyes open wide. Searching to find. Spinning around a place of hurt. Sorrows embracing me. Taking my happiness away. All of it now gone it has left me. Screaming why. I cant comprehend. No ones hand reacing to save me. Cant anyone see the pain thats now on the outside? See the hurt on the surface of my eyes. See the sorrows that floods my pride. Can anyone see the tears? Can anyone hear my cries? Someone please help me. Closed in a place of darkness. No light to see. No one trying to find me. The scars visible and deeping. My hearts now bleeding. Its getting cold in here in the darkness. I've opened my eyes for one last time. Looking for one tread of light. One last hope. My hand outstreached, Someone please pull me up. Save me from this misery. Still waiting for someone to quickly grab me before fate catches me. Wont anyone help me? __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds... Last edited by HR2004 : 02-04-2005 at 09:52 PM.

02-04-2005, 10:03 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	} } Liked it __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-05-2005, 01:16 PM	#3
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	thanks __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

02-06-2005, 11:19 PM	#5
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	thank you i thought it was nice one of my best. __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

02-07-2005, 01:01 AM	#6
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	quite emotional... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

02-07-2005, 05:10 PM	#7
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	yeah well i was very emotional like when something great happen or when something bad happens poems come easier than breathing i think you know when the poem came from the heart of that person or what their feeling. __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

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