The Creedfeed Competition entries-

[GrafiTTied]

*Drum roll*
I now present the first ever Lyrics Competition in the Creedfeed forum, but before you go ahead and read the entries please read the rules for voting.

The participants of this competition are:
1) Nagpo
2) Rocketqueen
3) Metalanus
4) Inside_us_all04
5) Stappissohot
6) Final Decision

Rules for voting
OK, as you have noticed I have posted the entries without any names beside it, this is to prevent any partiality. Anyone in the forum is allowed to vote including the participants, but obviously you cant vote for your own . You will send in the votes to [email protected] or just PM your votes with your screen name and your choice. You may leave a comment too. You can vote only once and for one entry only. Two weeks time is provided to send in your votes, this time period ends on June 10th. The lyricist with the most votes wins and will be announced on the 10th of June. Good day!

Entry:1
The Chair
shaking off the dust
is a matter of letting go
so much a part of you
must cucifie the old
Put on the new man
the image of Christ
surrendering the fear
that is locking you inside

Get up from your chair
the world spins faster
with each vacant stare

get out of your chair
your life passes by
when your waiting there

alone (wasting away)
alone

Dont take it out on me
hearing the truth I speak
Ive wasted many years
so much that was so near
so you want to wash away
the pain of yesterday
why not embrace the present
getting lost in the gift
given so you can forget

Get up from your chair
the world spins faster
with each vacant stare

get out of your chair
your life passes by
when your waiting there

alone (wasting away)
alone

I've heard your story
it doesnt seem fair
but neither is denying
yourself of the world

your not the only one
whose missing out
when you choose the safety
when you choose the chair

Entry: 2
Without You-

can it be over already
i just wanted it to be romantic
and i just love you so much
and everything else goes away
when i hear the sound
of your voice
and its been way to long
since ive talked to you
cuz everything is so
lost without you
and my happiness
is fading without you

what am i
without you
how are you doing
wish i was with you
forever n always

whats gunna happen now
ive been down now for a month now
n i dont know what'll break
cuz i just wannabe with you
and id do anything it took
to be in your arms again
and i dont know what'll take
cuz everything else just goes
wrong, and i just want out
cuz i dont know what to do
i just really dont
cept sides try n get over you
but i really dont want too

what am i
without you
how are you doing
wish i was with you
forever n always

Entry:3
No Proper Title------------------------------------------------------------------------
Walking along a lonley street
I get struck down by the devils fleet
Now he lays their next to me
Telling me all kinds of things
As he sticks his fork straight down through my heart

He whispers all those naughty things of gold
And women Ill ever need
He promised them...but I just had to sit and think for awhile

(chorus)
You can take my soul, you can take my breath
You can take my freedom but don't forget
An eye's for an eye and soon you'll get what's comin' to you
(end chorus)

I've figured what I'm gonna do
I'm gonna go down to Hell with you
But not for the reason you had planned to
So I grab my friends and there we go

Now we see the Devils thrown
We scream to him with _our_ words of gold

(chorus)
You can take my soul, you can take my breath
You can take my freedom but don't forget
An eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you

You can take my heart, you can take my life
Please take me forever, but don't deny
That an eye's for an eye and you'll get what's comin' to you
(end)
You will get whats comin' to you

Entry:4
PURPLE PAINED SKYS

HARD Not To Cry Hard Not To Pray Harder Not To Hurt And Cause The One I Love So Much So Much Pain Cant Pray Cant Speak My Silents Is A Sword A Weapon Of Truth A Weapon Of His Saviour I would Have Give My Life My Very Last Breathe To Turn His Face Away From The Darkness Away From The Dark Night How Could I That Night Under The Purple Pained Sky As The Lighting would strike everytime my heart would plunge along with my lungs when he drove the sword he drove the knife just to see if the moons was safe and i spoke as the purple pained sky soothing to my soul there in my heart its the safe the lock and the key with so much love the darkness could not comprehend a love that strong that held the horizon that had turn back time and made time stand still under the purple pained sky A Time By Gods Hands A Time That Love And Faith War And Blood Gaves Us This Place To Stand We Live Again By Gods Mighty Hands Never Forgetting The Ones Who Died The Ones Who Cried God Gave Time To An Oracle To Reach Down To You And Me You Gave Me Breathe You Took My Hand You Told Me To Not To Let Go I Will Never Let You Fall I Gave Up All I Will Never Let You Fall My Love Is To Strong The Purple Pained Sky There Was No Reason To Hide We Found Time To Cry We Found Time To Mourn We Found Time For Streneth We Found Time For Everything Under The Purple Pained Skys The Lighting Struck With My Every Heart Beat The Wind My Only Refuge His Heart My Hiding Place My Will His Streneth To See Beyond The Impossible For A Change To See Me As A Person To See Me As Human To See Save Him Under A Purple Pained Sky I Ran Away To Him In The Night He knows She Will Save Him , Cant Cry Cant Pray Cant Say i can only save i can only save purple pained skys its all there u and i i miss you more and i told you so under the purple pained skys i know i love you more under the purple pained skys light up the day light up the night only our eyes can see the entire picture of you and i the night you held me the night i bled in your hands under the purple pained skys you saved me from this dark place under the lights of a purple pained sky save save you under the purple pained skys forget about everything under the purple pained skys everything must have its glorys but i choose yours that’s why i was willing to die under a purple pained sky Hard Not To Cry Hard not to pray under a purple pained sky !!!!


Entry:5
Roses
Sitting here at home sweet home
I decide to write a poem about roses for an empty room
This story‘s maybe for you and me
Would you be there to shine the light onto my sea?

And as I roam to the point near before
Don‘t you look away
Don‘t you look away
Someone‘s going to be on my way
Someone‘s going to be

And if you‘re the one I want to see
Will you be there to open up your arms for me?
And open up a road before our eyes
With green trees and blue seas under a sunset sky?

And as I roam to the point near before
Don‘t you look away
Don‘t you look away
Someone‘s going to be on my way
Someone‘s going to be

Let me be your „everything will be alright“
Let me be your
Let me be your „we‘re going to reach our dreams sometime“
Let me be your
Let you and me share tradition
Let you and me share
Let me be your nearest friend
Just let me be your nearest friend

Let us try to do the best to give love to all
Let us try to do
Yeah let‘s try

Entry:6
Deathwatch

Hear the deathwatch as it ticks
Tick... tick... tick
See the dead raise from their graves
Tick... tick... tick
People lying there
Without a care
Now here they come
Come
Hear the deathwatch as it ticks
Tick... tick... tick
See the dead raise from their graves
Tick... tick... tick
People dying where
They'd been lying there
Now here they come
Come
Hear the deathwatch as it ticks
Tick... tick... tick
See the dead raise from their graves
Tick... tick... tick
Dead giving you a stare
You are the dead that's lying there
Now here we come
Come
Run away now
We don't care how
Run from the deathwatch as it ticks
Tick... tick... tick

[RMadd]

you're not going to enable the voting in this thread, so it would be easier to attract more votes?

[GrafiTTied]

i dont want the voting to be on this thread cause then the participants would be able to figure out the result even before i could announce it, and wahts the fun in that?? im goin to have to think of some good advertising strategies to attract people to this thread.

[bilal]

well...by the style of typin...i can identify most of the entries as to which contestent they belong...hehehe............but doesnt makes any difference............

[GrafiTTied]

the primary reason for not wanting the votes to be done here is just to keep the outcome of this competition in suspicion, so dont be spoiled sports.

[bilal]

ah......may be if the voting was done through PMs....then it might just have been more authenticated...uknow...no one can use dead ids and use em to vote.......just a suggestion.....

[GrafiTTied]

Fine! amendment made.

[Rocketqueen]

Quote: (Originally Posted by GrafiTTied)

Fine! amendment made.

Im A some what slow k....do we pm the votes to you...or do we pm our votes to the writers of who we liked the best...

[GrafiTTied]

you PM the votes to me

[Rocketqueen]

Quote: (Originally Posted by GrafiTTied)

you PM the votes to me

AWSOME!!!! Thanks

[GrafiTTied]

SInce ive not been around for a few days i havent been able to advertise this competition enough, so ive decided to extend the voting period till 15 of June. Come on people we really need more votes to get started. VOTE! VOTE!

[stappissohot]

Uhm, let's see, I am not going to be on the computer from the 11th on, 10th is my last computer day and also the last day of school, see where I'm going with that? I have no computer access at home so... if you could PM me the one who's in the lead so I can read it tomorrow I'd be much appreciated cause I'm not logging back on till like September!

[Rocketqueen]

poor babyyyyyyyyyyy morgan morgan if ya would just stop trying to find charles manson on the internet Yes Everybody Needs To Vote !!!!

[stappissohot]

Huh? Ok never mind... just peachy here... charles manson? I only know Marilyn Manson... tee hee

[GrafiTTied]

sorry i cant send the you the person with the leading votes cause we dont have enough votes. Whats the point of entering and not voting!