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Old 06-13-2005, 12:13 PM   #1
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Hide

don't look at me while I hide
I breathe it in
where I am headed and all is lost
in my world of fragile fears
in my rooms of frozen tears

don't tell me I'm losing it
don't tell me I miss you in my life
too far, too distant
why are you so high above me
I'm losing parts of me still

look for me behind the sound
calling you on and on
touch my light and guide me
will you recognize me
behind this wall

can you find my soul
in the realm of darkness
screaming and screaming to the empty sky
I can absorb you in my heart
even though it's so hollow inside

breathing in breathing out
no breath of life to be found
moving my thoughts making no sound
I have to walk this path
to awaken inside your light
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Old 06-13-2005, 02:12 PM   #2
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i have to walk this path to AWAKEN Inside Your Light, Beautiful
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-13-2005, 03:17 PM   #3
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look for me behind the sound
calling you on and on
touch my light and guide me
will you recognize me
behind this wall


awesome verse...liked the whole piece...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-13-2005, 03:45 PM   #4
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Thanks guys
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Old 06-13-2005, 04:39 PM   #5
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your welcome i liked the entire thing it was amazing
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Old 06-14-2005, 11:19 AM   #6
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WoW that was good!
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With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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