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Old 09-02-2004, 09:17 PM   #1
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(Arms) of Cold and of Pain

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Song I wrote....the guitar to it is good.

(Arms) of Cold and of Pain 2004

(Intro, soft guitar)

(verse 1, soft guitar playing and sung)

I look into your eyes, so lovely
They pierce through me and my heart
I feel your loving arms surround me
Thats when I break apart

I see that beautiful smile on your face
As you slowly go drifting by
I hear the words that fall short of this place
Feeling myself panic as I (slowly) die

(bridge 1, heavy guitar and screamed)

I plunge into arms so cold!!!
So scared, yet so bold!!!

(verse 2 heavy guitar and screamed)

Giving ones heart away
Cherishing those eyes that say
You were never strong enough
To do what you needed to
Still faithfully hoping to see you

(bridge 1, heavy guitar)

(continue verse 2)

Again one day, I'll see your face
In this place of pain and haste
Wishing for one more taste
Of pleasure inside the pain

(chorus/bridge 2, soft guitar and sung)

I just want to see your face again
Before I rise to meet my end
Because your face is just an image in my mind
I want to touch you before we leave this all behind

(chorus/bridge 2, heavy guitar and screamed)

I just want to see your face again!!!
Before I rise and meet my end!!!
Because your face is just an image in my head!!!
I want to touch you before I'm dead!!!
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Old 09-02-2004, 11:11 PM   #2
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i liked it alot
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Old 09-03-2004, 12:45 AM   #3
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Thank you much....Me and Kim just wrote something,but didnt finish it,yay! She rocks so hard.
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Old 09-03-2004, 12:51 AM   #4
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Coooooooooooooooooooooool Kim Rulessssssssssssss
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Old 09-03-2004, 01:30 AM   #5
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liked the lyrics, Mr. Seeker...what style of music are the lyrics set to...?

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Old 09-05-2004, 08:44 PM   #6
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Thanks....Its set to like...soft guitar for the beginning, it kind of reminds me of hoobastank-The Reason, and then when It says "Into arms so cold" ,it starts screaming with heavy guitar. Hard to explain, hehehe.
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Man You can almost feel it
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Old 09-05-2004, 11:16 PM   #8
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simply awesome!!!
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Old 09-06-2004, 10:37 PM   #9
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Thank you
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Old 09-06-2004, 10:49 PM   #10
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your welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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That was good Kevin
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Thank you much Julie
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