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Old 01-13-2004, 06:15 PM   #1
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Pain to the World

Pain to the word, for the rage screams
Heart in the dump, for the soulmate leaves
Run to the edge, for the hope is worthless
Stare to the acres below, for the purpose is gone
Put the arms in the air and take a last breath, for the end is now
Close the eyes, for the last view of the world is sacred in mind and soul.
Let go of all the worries and stress, for the savior is coming.
Land on the rough pavement, for judgement day has come!
Sirens blare to the city, for their jobs revolve around returning the soul back to its cruel home on this earth.

A voice rages at the lifeless body, for the faith was there-
Cry at the funeral, for the fight lead to lonlisness.
Pain to the world, for the rage screamed,
Now the soulmate is gone, for the other lost control.
Pain to the world...
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Old 01-13-2004, 07:51 PM   #2
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Wow liked that one Really!!!!
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Old 01-14-2004, 01:58 AM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Torn Signs) thanks!
your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-14-2004, 04:34 AM   #5
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Yea, Kim,it was really good.
Incase you didnt read what i said in my somthing corrupt poem,please email me at mrseeker04@yahoo.com
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