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06-09-2003, 11:56 PM
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poem for you guys(thanks for reading by the way!)
Loving Soul
All that Iv learned walking my road But I cant seem to be rid of this one load It clings to me like a thorn that cant seem to be removed It clouds my judgment and makes me feel so confused It tares away at my soul until only an empty space remains But I wont let it take her away because of what she contains Even though this load kills me my soul gives me the little peace I hold Combine with my spirit it tells me the untold What don’t some see or refuse it the same They tell me these things the outside cant tame It surpasses the mind and all it thinks real For the mind knows boundaries and the body can only feel And these things I hold so dear because some will never see There is more to this person than what is on the outside of me For that will shortly fade and my soul will remind That my body is fading but my soul you cannot bind And then will I have peace and be able to rest Knowing I did what’s right and chose what was best
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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06-10-2003, 12:17 AM
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That was really good Sam:P I love reading your poems
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06-21-2003, 09:59 PM
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That is a really awesome poem. Good work.
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Today I'm gonna try a little harder Gonna make every minute last longer Gonna learn to forgive and forget 'Cause we don't have long Gonna make the most of it Today I'm gonna love my enemies Reach out to somebody who needs me Make a change, make the world a better place 'Cause tomorrow could be one day too late --lyrics from "One Day Too Late" by Skillet from their new album "Awake" |
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06-23-2003, 01:40 AM
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no comment sam, u know how i feel about ur poems!!!!!!
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06-24-2003, 03:00 PM
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gosh ur an awesome writer sam and I mean it
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Another masterpiece Sam. I love reading your poems.
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Hello,
This is simply an awesome poem. You are very talented!! Peace.
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