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Old 06-09-2003, 03:45 PM   #1
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New Freedom Fighter verse

Hey, one of my favorite Creed songs is "Freedom Fighter." The only problem is I feel it is way too short (it's like half as long as the average Creed song!). You might think I'm nerdy, but I kinda gradually thought up a new verse to throw in there, right after the first chorus and before the "can't you hear us coming?" bridge. Here goes (don't laugh at me!!! )

"This life's so full of change,
All that's constant is the love
That comes from you, here in my arms;
It comes from up above.
(But) the wicked of this world
They would take that love away.
That's the reason I am
Freedom Fighting every day."

Maybe slap another chorus here, then go into the bridge...
I think it kinda works.... any thoughts?
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Old 06-09-2003, 11:39 PM   #2
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thats very good Mysacrifice, i really like it
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Old 06-10-2003, 09:37 AM   #3
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Awww yeah! Freedom Fighting every day!!! I'm feelin' it, mysacrifice411!!!
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Old 06-10-2003, 01:27 PM   #4
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I like it to
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Old 06-18-2003, 09:10 PM   #5
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Very cool. I love it.
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Old 06-21-2003, 10:05 PM   #6
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Not too bad an addition. Submit it to the band, and maybe they'll add it.


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Make a change, make the world a better place
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Old 06-23-2003, 12:17 AM   #7
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tru tru
its pretty kool aye
goin along wif da tune wen i red it
sweet as!!!
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Old 06-29-2003, 12:21 AM   #8
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pretty cool...goes along well with the tune
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