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Old 06-02-2003, 11:05 PM   #1
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Poem :)

Dark Sun

A flaw seeming so small was not worth my time
but now strength to stop it i just cannot find
it grew inside me fueld by my lust
to weak to fight this in what can i trust
a question unanswerd so my mind seeks a face
hoping for a road to take me from this place
for my sun is so dark and my road leads to nowhere
how could a flaw so small cause this much fear
but a lesson iv learned thers no flaw to small
and that what dwells in this world will someday all fall
so under a dark sun and walking my road
just walking toward the end draging this load
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My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If

To them Im seen as different but that I cant control
I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes
Refusing to see inside is something that they choose
And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse
For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose
Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take
Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone
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Old 06-02-2003, 11:09 PM   #2
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Great poem Sam:P I can relate to it a lot
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Oh
I'm a wandering soul
I'm still walking the line that leads me home
alone
All I know
I still got mountains to climb
on my own


Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot
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Old 06-02-2003, 11:24 PM   #3
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incrediable Sam...deeply profound...
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Someone finds salvation
In everyone
Another only pain
Someone tries to hide himself
Down inside himself he prays
Someone swears his true love
Until the end of time
Another runs away
Separate or united
Empty or insane
And be yourself is all that you can do
All that you can do

Be Yourself~Audioslave

~Ignore me, I dare you~
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