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06-13-2003, 11:15 PM
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Poem, Please Read!!!
I put alot of feeling into this one and hope you guys enjoy it.
To Live With You Wanting to believe my soul can for a moment be free But reminded of mistakes that still are plaguing me Making me feel important she takes my hand It seems to be easer with two to stand But the thoughts that still plague me make me grow old Wanting to embrace this but I remember the last time I was bold I regret my birth for those two things that haunt me inside I opened my soul for the sin I now hate to abide The sins that still sting inside of my heart I should have walked the right path from the very start But tears fill my eyes because I know it’s to late Still I refuse to except this as fate I know I can change but fear to express Thinking that others will think of me as less I cry for your help but you don’t seem to hear I feel you are with me but in these things aren’t near Please take this pain and make it go away Just let me feel normal if just for a day These things I beg of you to do just for me And if you don’t want me to feel then just help me to see Help me see what it is that you want me to do I just want to live right and to please only you But these scars that haunt me will always keep us apart I know they tell me your with me but I sometimes feel that you aren’t But believing so long and calling so loud Just hoping soon to be taken above the clouds To live with you in all that is good And being so close like I know that we should
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06-13-2003, 11:20 PM
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That was very good Sam:P I love reading your poems
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06-14-2003, 12:28 AM
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RockOn DUDE!
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06-18-2003, 02:46 PM
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Very good job!!!
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yea its real kool dude
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Very nice!!
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