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Poem I wrote
Another darker one
 Seeking Peace A clouded sky begins to darkens my way Lightning strikes above no longer can I stay I Listen for directions but thunder fills my ears I though I felt rain but it was only my tears Running from this place but were can I go The comfort I had was all just a show But I see a brake in the blinding storm I don’t know if I can make it for my soul is torn It’s hail beat my heart far to long My spirit fading but still I prolong I hope I find some way out For inside my heart is so full of doubt Refusing to fail never will I cease For the brake is still there and in it is peace
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-20-2003, 12:14 PM
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That was very good Sam
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05-20-2003, 12:51 PM
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Lovely as always..but I don't understand what the "brake" is...
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Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~ 
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05-20-2003, 07:17 PM
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The brake is something different for everyone. It could be being with your family at the end of a long day, being with someone you care about, God etc.
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-21-2003, 12:29 AM
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Okay..wow I have never heard that word used in that context before..thanks..always lookin for new words...
So is it getting less scary yet posting??
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yeah, I really care less and less what others think because this is just a way for me to express myself.
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-21-2003, 04:19 PM
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Good for you, Sam..that is really a big step..
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