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Old 11-21-2005, 06:48 AM   #1
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Breath Of Life

Breath Of Life

wish I was a godess
to save your soul this night
wish I found a tear in my eyes
wish I could open my heart
like once upon a time

wish I could cry away this pain
instead of being frozen inside
wondering about
if you're left scared and alone
to cry

wish I could find myself again
and heal you with a breath of life
wish I could give you warmth
wish I could be strong
wish I could say nothing is wrong

for all those times
that you brightened up these nights
when you talked to me tenderly
for all the times you fed me hope
when I was cold and alone
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Old 11-21-2005, 10:50 AM   #2
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wish i was a Godess to save your soul this night wish i found a tear in my eyes wish i could open my heart like once upon a time wish i could cry away the pain instead of being frozen and dry inside and reach my well wondering about if your scared and alone i wish i could find myself again and heal you with the breath of a life, it was beautiful MissSeeker i added a few of mine HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA thats fun sometimes we had a thread like that here once upon a time, when everybody when show off their talents and take a turn after the next person , HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA i sucked at it everybody was too good i,ve had to much coffea this morning thanks for sharing
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Old 11-22-2005, 05:53 AM   #3
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Nice, I liked what you added.
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Old 11-22-2005, 09:20 AM   #4
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thank you
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