Hold Me in Darkness

MrSeeker · 12-12-2003, 04:32 PM

Here is a link to Hold Me in Darkness: http://www.demonhunter.net/forums/in...showtopic=1305
I hope ya's like it

If you cant go to that link to see it,tell me and i will fix it

MrSeeker · 12-12-2003, 05:00 PM

here it is:
Hold Me in Your Darkness

"Hide me in a place where your screams bring me rest
Hold me ever so close to your chest
Hide me from the morid things
Hold me in your broken wings

Hide me behind the tears of fallen angels
Hide me in the shadows,where im free from misery
Hide me in your brokeness,your sweet brokeness
Hide me in your darkness,your sweet darkness

I feel so alone!
Hold me in your emptiness
Hold me is your care
Hold me in your darkness
Hold me in your cold despair

...hold me in the safety of your emptiness

All along here I thought your nothing
could bring me somthing
Somthing I never felt before,
somthing that would have me begging for more
Instead all it did was leave empty
Just like you are,
Empty!!!

I thought your darkness would help me
Instead it left me in misery
Beautiful misery,hold me!!!

...hold me ever so close!!!"

written by Kevin D. Fitzgerald

Please tell me what ya think. :-)

Torn Signs · 12-12-2003, 05:18 PM

Awesome job like usual, great turn of events. Keep it up!

creedsister · 12-12-2003, 06:50 PM

man i got a tell ya you get better all the time my mouth is open rite now i felt a lot reality in that one and emotions,,it was real,,Beautiful misery hold me that was killer,,im just a junkie for misery,,And that part i loved

MrSeeker · 12-12-2003, 08:14 PM

Thanks alot you two!!!

creedsister · 12-12-2003, 10:15 PM

MrSeeker · 12-13-2003, 03:17 AM

hahaha

creedsister · 12-13-2003, 06:48 PM

Hahahahah !!!!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-13-2003, 11:53 PM

That was great! I'd like to hear that as a song, I can imagine that it would be awesome! Keep it up! (I'll do like everyone else I guess, hahahahahaha!!!!)

MrSeeker · 12-14-2003, 12:29 AM

Thanks alot Defaultgirl! hehehe

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12-13-2003, 06:48 PM	#8
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Hahahahah !!!!!! __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-13-2003, 11:53 PM	#9
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	That was great! I'd like to hear that as a song, I can imagine that it would be awesome! Keep it up! (I'll do like everyone else I guess, hahahahahaha!!!!) __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

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12-12-2003, 06:50 PM	#4
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	man i got a tell ya you get better all the time my mouth is open rite now i felt a lot reality in that one and emotions,,it was real,,Beautiful misery hold me that was killer,,im just a junkie for misery,,And that part i loved

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