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04-07-2005, 05:14 PM
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Oh your touch
Oh your touch.
Oh your sweet...sweet touch. Such a deep place... Place in my heart. You occupy. Keep me alive. Everything about you... Seduces me. It take all my strenght to contain myself. Knowing of what is capable. When no one is around. Surronded in a romance. Imprisioned in these feelings. All the love are we willing. Wanting to show my affection. Oh your touch. Oh your sweet...sweet touch. Your embrace... Your sweet...sweet embrace. Oh your hugs... Oh your sweet...sweet hugs. Your lips. Your strong...strong lips. Strong yet gentle when we kiss. Oh your voice. Oh your sweet...sweet voice. The sound takes me away. Oh your touch. Oh your sweet...sweet touch. How can I refuse... When all I can think of... is your sweet...sweet touch. When our eyes meet. Theres no way to say no. All it takes is the way you say please.
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04-07-2005, 09:07 PM
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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04-08-2005, 08:32 AM
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really like the ending:
When our eyes meet. Theres no way to say no. All it takes is the way you say please. awewsome write... 
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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04-08-2005, 11:05 AM
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thank you both!
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Very cool, HR. I love the visual I get in my mind on this. Well done!
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04-11-2005, 04:32 PM
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thanks I really loved writting this one it was fun!
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