Towels in, lights are out pt. 1

nagpo · 12-18-2006, 12:57 AM

Peace to my heart
Please no more inferno
Veins rush with blood
Because of the...
Love bitten inferno

These feelings inside
I cannot hide
I'll burst if I do
So I must express my love for you

All I can think of is you
The inferno inside,
Is the excitement I feel when im near you
My blood pumps with anticipation
Fire bitten love

So, peace to my heart
Please no more inferno
Veins rush with blood
Because of the...
Love bitten inferno

nagpo · 12-19-2006, 05:16 PM

should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"?

HeavensOnFire · 12-19-2006, 09:01 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"?

you could,

nagpo · 12-21-2006, 12:21 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by HeavensOnFire)

you could,

i'll try it. what do yall think

nagpo · 11-06-2007, 09:11 PM

shit i hate this pile of trash

TrulyAmazing · 11-06-2007, 09:45 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) shit i hate this pile of trash

haaaaa we are revisting potery that we think now sucks no serious this was written with skills of briliance i thought it was anyways it reminds me of passion and warfare the constant warfare of the battle of blood inferno flesh

nagpo · 11-06-2007, 11:31 PM

really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay"

i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no.

TrulyAmazing · 11-08-2007, 06:36 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay"

i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no.

mabey then she was more of the flowers and butterflies and hearts type a potery type not in to the thrills and chills in stuff like hot infernos , in stuff likey that its really deep and passion like

nagpo · 11-08-2007, 09:55 PM

honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience.

TrulyAmazing · 11-10-2007, 02:09 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience.

no not a very good experince well my friend thats her lose your an awsome writer no she should have dumed that other guy

if she may have been more older and experinced should would have a since too and to appreciate good potery....

nagpo · 11-10-2007, 03:34 PM

ha thanks

TrulyAmazing · 11-11-2007, 10:31 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) ha thanks

your welcome

12-18-2006, 12:57 AM	#1
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Peace to my heart Please no more inferno Veins rush with blood Because of the... Love bitten inferno These feelings inside I cannot hide I'll burst if I do So I must express my love for you All I can think of is you The inferno inside, Is the excitement I feel when im near you My blood pumps with anticipation Fire bitten love So, peace to my heart Please no more inferno Veins rush with blood Because of the... Love bitten inferno __________________ I really have nothing to say Last edited by nagpo : 12-21-2006 at 12:21 AM.

12-19-2006, 05:16 PM	#2
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"? __________________ I really have nothing to say

12-19-2006, 09:01 PM	#3
HeavensOnFire USER INFO » Status: Wound Up Posts: 1,070 Joined: Oct 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"? you could, __________________ When NO One Else Can Understand Me When Everything I Do Is Wrong You Give Hope And Consolation You Give Me Strength To Carry On, And Your Always There To Lend A Hand In Everything I Do That The Wonder The WONDER Of You And When You Smile The World Is Brighter YOU Touch My Hand And Im Queen Your KISS To Me Is Worth A Fourtune Your Love For Me Is Everything I,ll Guess I,ll Never Know The Reason Why You Love As You Do Thats Just The Wonder The Wonder Of You

12-21-2006, 12:21 AM	#4
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by HeavensOnFire) you could, i'll try it. what do yall think __________________ I really have nothing to say

11-06-2007, 09:11 PM	#5
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 shit i hate this pile of trash __________________ I really have nothing to say

11-06-2007, 09:45 PM	#6
TrulyAmazing Banned USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,377 Joined: Oct 2007 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) shit i hate this pile of trash haaaaa we are revisting potery that we think now sucks no serious this was written with skills of briliance i thought it was anyways it reminds me of passion and warfare the constant warfare of the battle of blood inferno flesh

11-06-2007, 11:31 PM	#7
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay" i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no. __________________ I really have nothing to say

11-08-2007, 06:36 PM	#8
TrulyAmazing Banned USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,377 Joined: Oct 2007 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay" i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no. mabey then she was more of the flowers and butterflies and hearts type a potery type not in to the thrills and chills in stuff like hot infernos , in stuff likey that its really deep and passion like

11-08-2007, 09:55 PM	#9
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience. __________________ I really have nothing to say

11-10-2007, 02:09 PM	#10
TrulyAmazing Banned USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,377 Joined: Oct 2007 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience. no not a very good experince well my friend thats her lose your an awsome writer no she should have dumed that other guy if she may have been more older and experinced should would have a since too and to appreciate good potery....

11-10-2007, 03:34 PM	#11
nagpo USER INFO » Status: Bound and Tied Posts: 2,176 Joined: Mar 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 ha thanks __________________ I really have nothing to say

11-11-2007, 10:31 AM	#12
TrulyAmazing Banned USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,377 Joined: Oct 2007 Currently: Offline	Re: Towels in, lights are out pt. 1 Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) ha thanks your welcome

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