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07-01-2006, 02:03 AM | #1 |
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untitled but good nonethe less
if you can suggest a title that would really help
Im surrounded but I feel so alone a voice cuts through all of the noise saying you will never be more than a stranger to them your prescence is meaningless just give in prechorus I wont go out like this the demons cant stay the victory belongs to he who gives and takes away chorus Naked I entered Naked Ill leave all thats inbetween is not in my hands anymore verse 2 lost so much cant bear to look ahead cause I know what ill see and Ill know what is missing God I know it will all be a phase but it seems neverending and I just want to escape prechorus I wont go out like this Ill give you this day the victory belongs to he who gives and takes away chorus naked I entered naked Ill leave all thats inbetween is not in my hands anymore interlude: curse you and die I will never utter such blasphemies for your the only one for which I am living for your the only one holding me up when im hanging myself for your the only one who can bring down from this chair chorus again heres what its about. I have long not had freinds save for 1 really good freind who is moving away soon. to prepare for that Ive gone out and tried to make freinds and am doing well but in the middle of feeling good at a college bible study the thought came to me that "I would never be more than a stranger to these people." I believe in demonic influences and believe such thoughts and feelings that i get are the results of demon opression (not to be confused with posseion) my outlook on the future is bright and ive never been suicidal I wrote this from the persepctive that God will allow me to suffer for a time perhaps but bring me out of it. this is seen with many bible characters and Ive read some verses and believe some of the characters went through times of suicidal ideation. i know that having a biblical outlook on the future and placing things in Gods hands will keep me from thoughts of suicide should they come. |
07-02-2006, 05:22 PM | #2 |
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Re: untitled but good nonethe less
hmm, good, but too long. Another little helpful thing, maybe not tell what the poem is about, let people draw their own conclusions. But yea, I liked the message. Keep it up
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07-06-2006, 11:33 AM | #3 |
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Re: untitled but good nonethe less
hmmmm....we all are sorrounded though....but few can explain it.......nice going.........its strange that we shall all be feeling like strangers to one another and i dont find anything abnormal with it.......yeh....the thoughts of suicide are abnormal though.......to me......thoughts of suicide are rather and explanation that we dont belong here.......and we are here for a short journey...no matter who we have.....we all will always be strangers.......to each other.....cause the only true relation that we have in this world....is with LORD ALMIGHTY alone......all the demons and the powers of the earth.....are all set to make it fade and blury....but its good that u feel it strongly.........hmm.......lack of freinds han?........might just be a blessing for u.....might just be...........
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