Safety

MissSeeker · 11-16-2005, 11:11 AM

one step away from death
and I see the light
embrace of violence
brought me to the night
and I do regret

couldn't see
between right and wrong
never understood
I'm not singing that song
never saw I was giving myself
to something I'm not

and now I see you in there
and I'm not sure
whether to call you
a hungry violence seeker
but I care enough to know
you are not like them

and I want to tell you this
what you join is what you'll be
and I want to feel your relief
because you still have a chance
to change this in yourself

lets disembrace the dark
lets understand the light
we shell not sell ourselves
to violence and to his hunger
and we will be safe again

Rocketqueen · 11-16-2005, 02:31 PM

i loved the entire piece k One Step away from death always a great opening And i see the light embrace the Viloence and also another word could be used in place of Viloence , still very well written, could,nt see between the right and wrong never understood im not singing that song Never Saw I was giving myself to something im not and now i see you in there and im not surre whether to call you , i care enough to know your not like theme and i want to tell you this what you join is what you will be, AWSOME Misseeker

Rocketqueen · 11-16-2005, 02:33 PM

i wanna point out wrting advice haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and i cant spell sure right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

11-16-2005, 11:11 AM	#1
MissSeeker USER INFO » Status: A Melody Posts: 320 Joined: May 2005 Currently: Offline	Safety one step away from death and I see the light embrace of violence brought me to the night and I do regret couldn't see between right and wrong never understood I'm not singing that song never saw I was giving myself to something I'm not and now I see you in there and I'm not sure whether to call you a hungry violence seeker but I care enough to know you are not like them and I want to tell you this what you join is what you'll be and I want to feel your relief because you still have a chance to change this in yourself lets disembrace the dark lets understand the light we shell not sell ourselves to violence and to his hunger and we will be safe again __________________ "...in the frozen night I prayed, for a touch of warmth so long delayed...

11-16-2005, 02:31 PM	#2
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	i loved the entire piece k One Step away from death always a great opening And i see the light embrace the Viloence and also another word could be used in place of Viloence , still very well written, could,nt see between the right and wrong never understood im not singing that song Never Saw I was giving myself to something im not and now i see you in there and im not surre whether to call you , i care enough to know your not like theme and i want to tell you this what you join is what you will be, AWSOME Misseeker __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

11-16-2005, 02:33 PM	#3
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	i wanna point out wrting advice haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and i cant spell sure right haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

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