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06-07-2004, 11:57 PM | #1 |
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forever
i feel at times like im alone,
like you'll never comeback home and i think, maybe your gone for good, i feel like i've been shut down, kicked down, pushed onto the ground, but maybe, i'll get a little luck later, just breathe me in one more time, mabey then i'll see a difference, just hold me close as i close my eyes, then you'll see that im the reason, that you are even here and im not gonna disapear, the way you did and make you want me more, i'll just stay with you forever. ok guys thats all i have now. it's a song me and my band were thinking about using. i wrote pretty fast. i would like your opinion on it A.S.A.P.! thanx a million!!!!!! ~Emily~ |
06-08-2004, 12:56 AM | #2 |
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Hey I Really Was into that One, For Fast Writing It Was Pretty Damn Good, Im Impressed, It Was HomeRunnnnnnnnn For Me,
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
06-08-2004, 12:54 PM | #3 |
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I like it. It's good for being written on the spur of the moment.
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