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01-08-2004, 05:02 PM | #1 |
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I dont care anymore and we both knew it all along That no matter how hard I tried to be real I would always be fake,so damn fake I make up lies only to my demise One million failure's out of one million tries Place the noose around my neck You know you want to (you know I want you to) A loss of passion and a loss of hope No strength to carry on and no strength to cope Left in a forgotten world that only hate's and takes A piece of me each day And near the valley of the damned You will see our mangled bodys lay Put the knife to my throat You know you want to (you know I want you to) Dropped from the sky to defend myself against A world that only wants me dead Forced to listen to every lying word you ever said The more I see of you,the less I see of me The more I cry for help,the more I tend to bleed (The more I try,the more they eat me alive) Put the knife to my heart You know you want to and you know I want you to Im breathless and death is my only defense I was born torn into this worldly mess Forever wishing for something new Forever wishing for someone like you To come along and take me somewhere I belong" I just wrote it, hope ya like it Sorry for that small profanity,I wanted to get the point across,I'll take it out if you's want me to...
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WOW, that's really heavy, MrSeeker, and very well done. Very good imagery as well.
This is my favorite part: A loss of passion and a loss of hope No strength to carry on and no strength to cope Left in a forgotten world that only hate's and takes A piece of me each day And near the valley of the damned You will see our mangled bodys lay
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Thank's alot
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Mrseeker that was very Deep i like it my brother i really liked the last verses Killer
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Thanks Ta
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