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Old 10-28-2005, 03:39 AM   #1
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Crimson Tide

10/28/05


The shards of glass glitter like stars
Under an electric blue sky
Yes, indeed, the sun did rise
But today he will not notice

Bathed in a steady crimson rain
His eyes dart like butterflies
In search of the perfect flower
But today he will not find it

Stained and drained he lies immobile
Time is no longer on his side
Cold and gray the sun’s still out
But today he will not feel it

And you wonder where you are
How you managed to stray so far
Can’t for the life of you figure out why
So what the hell, just wave goodbye
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Old 10-28-2005, 09:12 AM   #2
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Doggy i worship your stuff i found crimson tide the perfect flower under an electric blue sky...yes indeed the sun will rise but today he will not notice bathed in steady crimson rain and you wonder where you are how you manged to stray so far can,t for the life of you figure it out why so what the hell just wave goodbye
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Old 10-28-2005, 01:40 PM   #3
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Awww, thank you, Rocketqueen
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Old 10-29-2005, 12:24 AM   #4
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