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Old 11-21-2004, 10:44 PM   #1
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holding me

Your strong arms wrapped around me.
I was cold but now your warmth has enwraped me.
the scent of you so close.
your heart next to my ear.
your fingers run through my hair the strands even tingle.
all is right.
noone has held me as close as you.
You tell me that you love me.
and i look at you and say and i love you.
you smile then i smile.
this is going to last awhile.
forever i want to say but i cant.
I want forever to be us.
but hey we dont know what the future holds.
all i know is ill always love you and while were together,
forever is right now for us.
lasting love i know you have,
lasting together i know we will.
we both have to want it.
i know i do
i think you do
but i love you and care for you.
so when you hold me like you are its forever in my eyes
it feels like time slows down.
its like everythings waiting for us
which is great its time they wait.
i need something thats lasting.
its our turn they can wait,
i love you please keep holding me close.








i dont know if this one is that good lol
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Old 11-22-2004, 12:09 AM   #2
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you forgot to say pretty please it was good
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 11-22-2004, 10:01 PM   #3
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LOL thanks
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Old 11-22-2004, 10:27 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by HR2004) LOL thanks
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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