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Old 08-21-2003, 05:32 PM   #1
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HEy newbie here, lol, ne ways thought id share one o ma poems with ya

love the frog....... ne way one o ma poems, can only hope it to be as good as someo the ones on here.

Dark nights

these dark nights get darker i swear,
without u my light, u are never there,
u said u would,
u said we could,
as the dark closes in, theres one thing u should know,
before i go, into the night, guided by a darker crow,
the flightless birds of my dreams,
now guides me through my nightmares, or so it seems,
the bird lands and crows, a meniacal sound peirces the night,
the darkness closes in, there is no more light,

sounds echo in the distance, seeming so bright,
but im left listening to screams in the the night
running through my brain like a million spears, penetrating my very soul,
i feel it closing, closing to my goal.
i see the shine of a blade, silver in the dark,
i feel its smooth cold steel venire merciless, without remark
i plunge the blade, handle an all into my chest,
and i let the gaping wound where my heart was do the rest,
i fall on my side only to see the light tearing at the dark,
and as i die i say 'at last youve come' this is my final remark,
these nights are never dark now.
because u my light have returned for me.


let me know what u think guys, i will be postin more on the site soon, if u wanna message me.
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Old 08-21-2003, 06:55 PM   #2
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That is a very good poem, I like it.
The bunny is really cute, too. I have never seen that done before.
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Old 08-21-2003, 07:44 PM   #3
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Grunge4eva Scary poem Hay At least you gotta A Light At The End Whats With The Bunny? God Bless Ya I Liked It
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Old 08-21-2003, 09:43 PM   #4
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love the poem-
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Old 08-21-2003, 11:33 PM   #5
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Old 08-22-2003, 04:27 AM   #6
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thank u, i dunno why i put the bunny ....cos i didnt have a kick ass qoute i guess lol...but the bunnys stayin lol hey... at least its somethin to go awwww over eh? :P
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Old 08-22-2003, 03:31 PM   #7
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It Puts In Mind Of The Engerzier Bunny In way Then Again It Also Puts N Mind Of Thouse Hampters Things On Cartoon Network Its Of Key With Your Poem Thats what makes It Apealing God Bless Ya
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Old 08-22-2003, 04:38 PM   #8
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the world would be such a desolate place if everthing was doom an gloom. and hamtaros rule lol. haha yeahh ne ways, im thinkin o removing the bunny for a bit, and putit as a seal of approval on happy shit, no depressed shit like i normally write tho gotta admit i think im unheathly attatched to that frog..so kewl and no i aint stoned dont touch drugs. lol.
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Old 08-22-2003, 10:20 PM   #9
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Yea the frog puts n mind Of A Green MNm Guy I Like The Mnm guys Tho Loose The Bunnny Keep The frog He Looks happy To be Here God bless
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Old 08-24-2003, 11:57 AM   #10
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You are very talented with those words.
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