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04-23-2004, 11:23 AM
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Mercy
By: Amy Aumick 2004
A red sash, a spinning top; Betrayed by friend, betrayed by cop. Where to turn? Madness stop! Enter Love... Wake up on a Sunday morn Feeling beaten, battered and torn. Eyes will close Cry some more. Enter Love... Dreams of more than a moment, Glimpses of what our lives have meant. Courage here Since we met. Enter Love... Warmth from love's gleaming fire, Cupid's sister named Desire; Stir it up Go higher. Enter Love... |
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04-23-2004, 11:52 AM
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Wow, that is beautiful, Aimee. I love that last verse...Stir it up, Go higher!!! Awesome job as usual
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04-23-2004, 01:12 PM
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that was a really great poem I loved it! good job!!
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Cry some more Enter love I love that line. So powerful and so true. Who hasn't felt that? Terrific job, Amy.
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04-23-2004, 10:27 PM
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That Rocked Gal Got my aproval, I really love that way it ends and begins Killer
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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I like the third stanza really well. I like the whole think really well, but the 3rd stanza was really cool. Great job!
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp |
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good job Aimee!
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Wow..Aimee, so good to still see you here and writting. You have a gift treasure it...
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Thank You Goddess. You compliment means a lot. I'm happy you are still here too.
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O/T in a major way but i have to ask about the tat there! that must of killed doing it there....
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more opions, i really liked this one as a matter of fact it was one of my favorites, from Aim, im one of her fans
, But, H,M.D, elobrate yo question please, OT
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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The tat didn't hurt too much except right near my ankle bone.
Woo-Hoo! I have a fan
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I know aint it killer
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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