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Old Soul's Call
Old Soul’s Call Behind old eyes See the wisdom they hold Steeped in rich history Once proud and bold Now set aside Like a used book Put on a shelf … No second looks Behind old eyes What do you see Visions of your Own mortality… The coming of death Upon quiet wings Brings peaceful sleep... To age-ed it sings Behind old eyes The message is lost To the youth of today At a terrible cost... Such wisdom and truth Could be shared by all If only they heard The old soul’s call…. ©2004 Susan D. |
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that was amazing!!
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11-01-2004, 06:51 PM
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I loved the last line Awsome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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