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Last Memories
Last Memories
My last memory was of your last breath, Your last memory was of torturing me, You knew what you wanted, you knew what I wanted, We wanted the same thing, I wanted to leave this cold dark and dank Earth, You wanted to remove me from the world so your hurt could subside with my painless death, You thought you had me, We had the same wish, I came You had a knife, Blood was to be shed, But now, Your last memory was of me, Falling, Blood shattered and spreading everywhere, A pool comitted by my own sword, My own hand, Now my last memory is of my last step, Your last memory is of my last breath.
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12-10-2003, 05:35 PM
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clap clap clap,,great one i was going post something but you got me beat haha,,I guess i will have to post another,,strange,,im ok,,
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Ok, let's see what you got and thanks for the compliment. Have a good day now,
KIM
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12-10-2003, 05:52 PM
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i really got in your poem kim G,f,,Song of the Day For me Fuel_Bad Day,,LOL,,Keep em coming!!!
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Yes!!!! very awesome!!!! *claps* It seems like every single time i post somthing that i've written,you come in and post somthing thats 3 times better  Awesome work 
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Great work! That's really deep, but it good!
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thank you all, but honestly I was in a good moood when I wrote that lol. Thanks, but there are still tons of good writers on here. Have a good one,
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