Stories

[nagpo]

The postman has delivered me
To my arrival now
The judge has been seated

So both sides start fighting...

I screamed out!
"I've been made a fool by her, I must abuse her"
I've been beaten down, so now nobody can misuse her

I'm holding on
To the edge of my life now

I'm waiting for the judge to sentence me, yeah
Their I come, I chop my own hands off
And hey I fall
To a place where ungrown men drown in there own faults now

So I'll be taken to the room
Where death seems to haunt me
I'm thinking that I'll destroy myself now
But these chains inept my ability

I'm screaming loud with rage and fury

The destroyer comes and says,
"It's time for you to die now"
My last words were,
"Why did I go this far now?"

[nagpo]

NOTE:This was my first song, ever. wrote this when i was like 12. i did go back and fix things up a bit, but not by much. the line "inept my ability" is entirely new. If it sucks, remember, i was 12.

if theres any grammatical errors just inform me via pm(for all poems/songs)

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

NOTE:This was my first song, ever. wrote this when i was like 12. i did go back and fix things up a bit, but not by much. the line "inept my ability" is entirely new. If it sucks, remember, i was 12.

if theres any grammatical errors just inform me via pm(for all poems/songs)

im haunting by a life a destiny that seems to call my name from the sky and reminded the sun still sets the sun still shines as long as your there i know you will protect me from harm yet my rage is bottled for the tounges i see damn what is all beautiful to me and all thats ever loved and understood me this rage inside me i set at to fine its all my melody my song lost somewhere in time I WAS 11 when i wrote that piece above btw nice poem by the way alot of venting there But i,d would have called it my pass time in hell

[nagpo]

glad you liked it. i don't know why it's called stories. it just was just written on the top of the paper, so i stuck with it. i didin't want to change to much in fear of ruining it.

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

glad you liked it. i don't know why it's called stories. it just was just written on the top of the paper, so i stuck with it. i didin't want to change to much in fear of ruining it.

yes indeed i understand excaltey