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07-28-2008, 05:09 AM | #1 |
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I dunnp, Im bored
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that I never understood brings memories flooding back Id cut them off if I could these four walls here remind me of how I never stood a chance faded pictures in broken frames stop me where I stand Every brand new thought of you brings the same old tears Soon theyll flood this empty house and help soak in my fears If I had known it wasnt in me, I would have never said forever If only I had known myself you wouldnt have felt love sever I cant stop blaming you though I know its all my fault you should have known the me that died inside you knew every other thought after all
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Re: I dunnp, Im bored
Reminds Me Of Really Really Really Great Classic smooth groovy i like it HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Bad Title Of Course but great lines And verses mabey you saw this piece as same as i did all the titles you could work with on this one Have more in likely already been taken my choice would be would be to shoot with like one of those alternative titles that would really work for this piece Like sand storm walls but either way awsome piece man
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Re: I dunnp, Im bored
I dont really like this one, i was just bored. Thanks for the kind words though.
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your welcome i liked it though really good piece of boring stuff
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