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Old 01-12-2006, 05:06 PM   #1
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the haunted

I wrote this today. Id love to put it into a song with my band but we have a christian theme and the lyrics are not at all me. I wrote it from the perspective of someone who needs someone to help them but feels neglected . again not me.

put yesterday in a box
but couldn't close the lid
in the shadow of my mind
but nowhere out of sight
the demon on my back
I somehow manage to hide
though I have moved on
it follows close behind
drug by a noose
I fear will be mine

Take a look at me and see
yes I am haunted
reach out your hand and know
yes it is wanted

Your a mirror I look in sometimes
cause I need some confirmation
to know theres more to me
to know that I am alive
Perhaps you found some freedom
left something that stayed away
perhaps you had a noose
you cut away at overtime

take a look at me and see
yes I am haunted
reach out your hand and know
yes it is wanted

again not me . the point im trying to make is that we never know what the guy next to us is going through so we should always try to put others above ourselves
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Old 02-11-2006, 12:59 AM   #2
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Re: the haunted

awwww that was sweet your a mirror i look in sometimes for confirmanation or how ever you spell it to know theres more to me to know that im alive i loved it damn good wrting
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