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03-16-2005, 03:40 PM
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right guys this is the first time ive posted anything like this on here.
Fake You drive me crazy the way you string me along you make me feel wanted but i was wrong i thought you where real but you're just fake you seemed so special but i made a mistake you took advantage it wasn't fair you've screwed up my life and you still don't care.
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*And I know* *You’re a part of me* *And it’s your song* *that sets me free* *I sing it while* *I feel I can’t hold on* *I sing tonight* *cause it comforts me* "You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same" find me here |
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03-16-2005, 09:02 PM
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  i liked it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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03-16-2005, 10:07 PM
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That was really awesome!I liked it alot!
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03-17-2005, 03:43 PM
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thanx guys i really appreciate the great comments, i was nervous about posting it cause you're all so good.
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*And I know* *You’re a part of me* *And it’s your song* *that sets me free* *I sing it while* *I feel I can’t hold on* *I sing tonight* *cause it comforts me* "You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same" find me here |
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03-17-2005, 03:46 PM
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ohs goodness dont be nerveous i know i like rule
 but i thought it was awsome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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03-17-2005, 03:49 PM
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aw thankyou
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*And I know* *You’re a part of me* *And it’s your song* *that sets me free* *I sing it while* *I feel I can’t hold on* *I sing tonight* *cause it comforts me* "You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same" find me here |
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03-17-2005, 06:53 PM
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I agree with creedsister yes we are good but your work is too and you can only get better by posting more and more!
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03-17-2005, 08:01 PM
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Yes
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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03-17-2005, 08:26 PM
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nicely done, anna1011...keep writing...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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