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Old 12-12-2003, 05:32 PM   #1
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Hold Me in Darkness

Here is a link to Hold Me in Darkness: http://www.demonhunter.net/forums/in...showtopic=1305
I hope ya's like it
If you cant go to that link to see it,tell me and i will fix it
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:00 PM   #2
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heck with the link

here it is:
Hold Me in Your Darkness

"Hide me in a place where your screams bring me rest
Hold me ever so close to your chest
Hide me from the morid things
Hold me in your broken wings

Hide me behind the tears of fallen angels
Hide me in the shadows,where im free from misery
Hide me in your brokeness,your sweet brokeness
Hide me in your darkness,your sweet darkness

I feel so alone!
Hold me in your emptiness
Hold me is your care
Hold me in your darkness
Hold me in your cold despair


...hold me in the safety of your emptiness

All along here I thought your nothing
could bring me somthing
Somthing I never felt before,
somthing that would have me begging for more
Instead all it did was leave empty
Just like you are,
Empty!!!

I thought your darkness would help me
Instead it left me in misery
Beautiful misery,hold me!!!

...hold me ever so close!!!"

written by Kevin D. Fitzgerald


Please tell me what ya think. :-)
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Old 12-12-2003, 06:18 PM   #3
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Awesome job like usual, great turn of events. Keep it up!
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Old 12-12-2003, 07:50 PM   #4
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man i got a tell ya you get better all the time my mouth is open rite now i felt a lot reality in that one and emotions,,it was real,,Beautiful misery hold me that was killer,,im just a junkie for misery,,And that part i loved
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Old 12-12-2003, 09:14 PM   #5
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Thanks alot you two!!!
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Old 12-12-2003, 11:15 PM   #6
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Old 12-13-2003, 04:17 AM   #7
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hahaha
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Old 12-13-2003, 07:48 PM   #8
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Hahahahah !!!!!!
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That was great! I'd like to hear that as a song, I can imagine that it would be awesome! Keep it up! (I'll do like everyone else I guess, hahahahahaha!!!!)
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Thanks alot Defaultgirl! hehehe
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