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06-15-2006, 12:12 AM | #1 |
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the vase
based on a short story called odor of chrysanthemums
flowers on the floor fallen from a broken vase knocked off in a hurried rush to deliver the news of a tragic death round like a womb sustaining life inside shattered in an instant leaving sharp edges behind she looks into the mirror knowing its the end the child inside has died with the odor of chrysantheums who will be the man to peice her together again who will be the man to place his seed in her noone |
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Re: the vase
interesting
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Re: the vase
hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm
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This Piece Of Potery Is Missing A Lot Of Pieces i think and the time of the wrting was kinda off but not much using that book was great idea i think It Worked Context is all good ....AMEN AND AMEN
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