Punished

Sincirr · 01-15-2004, 10:05 AM

Punished

Punish me with your ignorance,
Judge me with a closed mind.
A friend is a friend.
Sposed to accept every part.
I can do that, guess U cant cos
U dont know unconditional acceptance,
so U cant give it.

But why cant U accept that I am a human being!
And U can speak your mind, but I am silenced?
Muzzle your mouth or else you lose a friend!

Should have known better.
Why did I bother with yet another who
Judges with pre-programmed arguments.
Doesn’t see U 4 who U are.
Of course it’s doomed 4 failure!
Here comes the proverbial rejection.
Here comes the hurt. OK,Fine. U wont be the last.

I would like to have friends.
Friends who dont judge every word I say.
Friends who trust and dont run away
when I finally express my life freely.
When I do up go your insecurity walls
I’m cut off, every integrity ignored.
From there on, categorized as one with
a conservative closed mind.

You have absolutely no idea.
I AM free.
I HAVE an open mind.
Open to the one who made it, closed to the one who destroys it.
This is wisdom. U know nothing, but I’m
Punished by your ignorance.
Lost another friend.

Punished with your ignorance,
Judged with a closed mind.

Dogstar · 01-15-2004, 11:25 AM

Wow, Sincirr, great stuff!

I would like to have friends.
Friends who dont judge every word I say.
Friends who trust and dont run away
when I finally express my life freely.

Powerful verse.

creedsister · 01-15-2004, 01:00 PM

wow sincirr i can relate to all of those things Really,,,nice u keep it up

Sincirr · 01-16-2004, 07:11 AM

Torn Signs · 01-16-2004, 08:06 AM

excellent job, especially with keeping the flow throughout it all. Keep it up.

creedsister · 01-16-2004, 01:54 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) Tah.

HAHA

JulieCitySlicker · 01-17-2004, 08:47 PM

That was very good sincirr

Sincirr · 01-18-2004, 07:39 AM

Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with.

creedsister · 01-18-2004, 10:42 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with.

yep i know i love the ongoing poem thing its just sooo like me love it Great idea in stuff

01-15-2004, 11:25 AM	#2
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Wow, Sincirr, great stuff! I would like to have friends. Friends who dont judge every word I say. Friends who trust and dont run away when I finally express my life freely. Powerful verse. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-15-2004, 01:00 PM	#3
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	wow sincirr i can relate to all of those things Really,,,nice u keep it up __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-16-2004, 01:54 PM	#6
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) Tah. HAHA __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-17-2004, 08:47 PM	#7
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was very good sincirr __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

01-18-2004, 10:42 AM	#9
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) Thanks for all the encouragement. I dont seem to be able to write in neat stanzas or whatever U call em. It just comes out. I must say that that ongoing poem that U guys are doing is amazing! I cant believe U guys can just flow like that, its pretty amazing what U are coming up with. yep i know i love the ongoing poem thing its just sooo like me love it Great idea in stuff __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

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