Far Away

MissSeeker · 03-03-2006, 06:19 AM

don't leave
as the evening falls
don't die away
please hear my calls
can't let you fall

once upon a time
you were so close and real
the air I breathe
time won't take away
what I feel

as you are with her
feel me sometimes
and when you kiss her
feel my vibe
we own the time

it's a broken heart
that I carry in me
to see you with her
where you will be
never again with me

the man for whom my heart beats
walks distant streets
I reach out my hands
to feel you trough the atmosphere
to feel you there

though destiny won't smile at me
I keep you here
so close and real
please remember me
once I'm not here

Rocketqueen · 03-03-2006, 11:01 AM

The Lovley Misseeker that wrting was as in one piece as was in many and it was beautiful it puts me in mind of a oldish gospel Tune That Went Something Like This, HE WILL PICK UP THE PIECES TIME AND TIME AGAIN THERE IS NOT A BROKEN VESSEL GOD CAN,T HEAL Dont Leave As The Evening Calls dont Die Away Please Hear My Calls Can,t Let You Fall The Entire Poem Was Very Very Well Written

Finaldecision · 03-03-2006, 11:21 AM

Really well-written, melancholy lyrics! But you still got lines of hope in the end, which I think is good!

03-03-2006, 06:19 AM	#1
MissSeeker USER INFO » Status: A Melody Posts: 320 Joined: May 2005 Currently: Offline	Far Away don't leave as the evening falls don't die away please hear my calls can't let you fall once upon a time you were so close and real the air I breathe time won't take away what I feel as you are with her feel me sometimes and when you kiss her feel my vibe we own the time it's a broken heart that I carry in me to see you with her where you will be never again with me the man for whom my heart beats walks distant streets I reach out my hands to feel you trough the atmosphere to feel you there though destiny won't smile at me I keep you here so close and real please remember me once I'm not here __________________ "...in the frozen night I prayed, for a touch of warmth so long delayed...

03-03-2006, 11:01 AM	#2
Rocketqueen USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,432 Joined: Oct 2005 Currently: Offline	Re: Far Away The Lovley Misseeker that wrting was as in one piece as was in many and it was beautiful it puts me in mind of a oldish gospel Tune That Went Something Like This, HE WILL PICK UP THE PIECES TIME AND TIME AGAIN THERE IS NOT A BROKEN VESSEL GOD CAN,T HEAL Dont Leave As The Evening Calls dont Die Away Please Hear My Calls Can,t Let You Fall The Entire Poem Was Very Very Well Written __________________ I Indeed Babtize you with water BUT ONE Mightier Than I Cometh The Latchet Of Whose Shoes I,am Not Worthy To Unloose He Shall Babtize You With The Holy Ghost And With FIREEEEEEEEEE John The Babtist You Never Count Your Money When YOUR Sittin At The Table There Will Be Time Enough To Count,em When The Dealings Done

03-03-2006, 11:21 AM	#3
Finaldecision USER INFO » Status: Misconception Posts: 90 Joined: Mar 2006 Currently: Offline	Re: Far Away Really well-written, melancholy lyrics! But you still got lines of hope in the end, which I think is good!

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